hmm....what have i learnt today???...such a difficult topic to write on..(not that i didn't pay attention but..., it is so difficult to express what i learned today in words)..
Well....we were given a composition from miss low, done by verna goh from 6-2 last year..790 words in a compo.. i would take at least two and a half hours to write such a long compo..my whole body would be so cramp, not to mention my neck...i find the story very ineresting and full of suspense too..she starts her composition with something like a flashback ,which is what many students usually use for the beginning of the story..she uses lots of interesting phrases such as 'screamed in fear and trepidation','unfolding right before my very eyes'and'audible sighs of relieve'..(i would definitely memorise a few n use them in my compos.. ha ha 跟verna偷学功夫)she describes everything very precisely and i can almost picture the scene in the story in my head..i think she could improve on .....NOTHING..seriously...
further more, verna's ending links with her beginning nicely..she is very creative..i think that she could be a very famous autor when she grows up...............
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Hi Vanessa, with will and practice, I'm sure you can write as well as Verna. Grammatically, you are close to being perfect. Continue to boost up your vocabulary and you are on your way to clinching the A* for English. Oh yes, please PUNCTUATE your entries accurately.
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